User talk:Partysnaax15/The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim – Hearthfire

The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim – Hearthfire Peer review
HI Partysnaax15!!!

I am just going to share with you some tips for your article.

To began this peer review, I'll began with your starting sentence. Although good you start to tell about the game, it seemed too rushed into the subject. Starting to read it, I was confused. I wasn't sure if it was a board game, app etc. Try and give more background information about what Skyrim is, and then go into what the add on, the elder scrolls, is about.

Secondly, I would recommend more sources for your starting. Although there are sources throughout the rest, the whole first section does not have any. There are many facts in there that can be fact checked and verified.

Lastly, the organization can be fixed a bit. Move all passages about what the game is about, making of the game and any "History" of the game towards the beginning to give viewers more of an idea what the game is, then other information below.

I would like to stress though how great this article is as well! This article through out is very well written and has a bunch of information and research put into it. The body section all have their sources next to them and are also easy to find in the sources section. This article was an easy read and very clear with its information. With some small fixes it will be great! TheCrystalHermitCrab (talk) 16:40, 30 September 2022 (UTC)


 * TheCrystalHermitCrab (talk) 16:41, 30 September 2022 (UTC)

The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim - Hearthfire Peer Review
Hello!

I have finished your peer review and here are the main points of it.

There needs to be some more context within your gameplay section as well as fixing some structural points.

Look through your sources and make sure they are from reliable sources.

Overall, the article is very good and very well written! Snoodle17 (talk) 14:40, 2 October 2022 (UTC)