User talk:Pas94110/sandbox

Review of "Causes" subsection - I would clarify what you mean by "gross hematuria", or make the terminology consistent with the visible/non-visible organization you are using - I would change the organization under visible hematuria to painful and not painful (as opposed to painful and no pain), just to keep the terminology symmetric - I like the use of bullet points. The information is concise and easy to follow - Under the "kidney stones" bullet point: might want to include the term nephrolithiasis as well, though I think the link to the kidney stones page may be sufficient. - the phrase that begins "cause sharp, colicky...": consider rephrasing to "other symptoms include..." - Second bullet point: to help with clarity and structure, I think the bulleted list would be improved by having the cause, followed by a dash and a brief description. For example: - Kidney stones/ nephrolithiasis - other symptoms include x, y, z    - Lower urinary tract infection - typically presents with pain above the pubis (insert link) and pyuria, which is white blood cells in the urine, in addition to hematuria - Under the Non-visible blood subsection: I appreciate the explanation of how microscopic hematuria is detected. The language is clear and avoids jargon. - The sentence that begins "any part of the kidneys...", I would consider rephrasing to "Microscopic hematuria can originate from any part of the kidneys, ureter or bladder." - Consider a brief description of each cause of non-visible hematuria.