User talk:PatDillard/Sleep disorder

Peer Review
I would suggest finding some resources to help back up your statement, this would help fill out your contribution. Great starting point though.JazzyBen1234 (talk) 21:21, 5 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I'm currently working to improve my contributions and find better sources.PatDillard (talk) 21:32, 11 October 2019 (UTC)

Reading through this article the information presented is relative to the article and how the information is clear and organized. The topics in the article that help copes with sleep disorder are descriptive on how to help sleep disorders. The information is needs more sources to back up information. The article is well written so far and has information that can be added to the article to improve certain areas of the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vidaphan12 (talk • contribs) 00:53, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Got it, I plan to make my additions my clearer so that It doesn't sound like I'm repeating information already given. Any more advice after I rework it, feel free to let me know. I'm not great at this, but I'm trying :) PatDillard (talk) 21:32, 11 October 2019 (UTC)