User talk:PatDillard/Sleep disorder/Andrianicole1 Peer Review

I feel that your draft was very well written, the advice I would have to give would be to maybe expand on other parts of the article such as other treatments or affects of the disorder. Anything to expand on information that may not already be clear or present in the article as whole. Andrianicole1 (talk) 01:04, 7 October 2019 (UTC)