User talk:Pat r mclean

Townswomen
I am staggered that we do not seem to have an article already about the Townswomen's Guild. Unfortunately, your submission leaves so much to be desired that I have marked it "rub out and start again"! There are two basic problems: The subject is notable, so why not have a look at the WI and other similar articles and try writing a proper article for the TwG? -- RHaworth 10:28, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
 * It looks like a copyright violation and we must be satisfied that the article, preferably is in your own words, but if not comes with a proper copyright release.
 * It is double spaced which means that it is not presented in proper paragraphs. Indeed absolutely no attempt has been made to format the article.

My apologies. I hate people who leap onto new articles and mark them for deletion within minutes. I have fallen into the trap myself! I withdraw the prod. I shall watch the article with interest. But do stick to the capital G version! -- RHaworth 10:35, 7 August 2007 (UTC)