User talk:Patelcamps4608

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (October 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Theroadislong (talk) 09:07, 12 October 2019 (UTC)

Alison Maclean
Minor revisions needed. CropMilk (talk) 14:22, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Great sources, well-written overall!
 * Is all the information in the first sentence of the Early Life and Education section from the same source? If so, the citation should go on the end of the sentence.
 * Ensure that any factual statements are supported by a citation, i.e. “Kitchen Sink, 12 minutes of surreal suburban nightmare […]”, “After her success with the 1989 short film, Kitchen Sink, Maclean was noticed by Touchstone Pictures,”etc.
 * Ensure that the tone remains clear and formal throughout, i.e. “she got her second feature film”, “its ability to enchant but to also divide successes and losses, truth and imagination.”

Your draft article, User:Patelcamps4608/sandbox


Hello, Patelcamps4608. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "sandbox".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! UnitedStatesian (talk) 23:58, 10 October 2020 (UTC)