User talk:Pato247/sandbox

hello, looks pretty great so far, I agree with the notes you have on your sandbox. One thing I would mention looking more into is finding citations for the paragraph under the section "Early years and personal life." As well as the second half of the second paragraph under "Criminal activities, arrest and convictions" Mavila3 (talk) 20:26, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

After reading over the main page a few times I could really get the feel of what her purpose was. It's a great article from my view. There are a few things that I could suggest in adding to the main article. The introduction maybe should have a little bit more literature on who she is. The other thing as I was reading the article there is apart in the 2nd sub heading that to me doesn't seem to flow correctly or it's missing an item or two. This is between "Torres" and foot note 8, its only a few lines but maybe you could mention something more about Edwin Cortes and his involvement. Other than that I think its an awesome read.(MarcosXavier78 (talk) 08:29, 18 May 2019 (UTC))

Peer Review
Hey There! This is a really interesting and I felt intrigued to want to learn more about her. However, I think you could add some more information about her life to maybe help set up the rest of the article to give a solid idea of who she is. Also, the section about the Revolution of Love is fairly short so I think expanding on this idea would provide a more solid foundation for the article. Happy editing!