User talk:Patriciaenrica/sandbox

Your assignment is focused and works through the topics in a comprehensive series. It's quite good, i liked it. Miller5108 (talk) 13:40, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

Lots of information and looks really well! The only thing I noticed was the references section was kind of a wall of text, but it still got the point across! Great job! Afoxcalledcallie (talk) 13:42, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

I agree with the above comment, the "additional sources" section could use some spacing to make it easier to read. Overall good research and topic choice! Jonno 360 (talk) 14:11, 18 November 2013 (UTC)