User talk:Patrick Dooris/sandbox

I really liked your layout and your page has a clear path of information that checks out to be from accurate and reliable sources. The tone of your piece appears to me to be neutral and fair. Upon proof reading and checking out your sources you have done a very good job of researching and translating the data you have found on you subject. -Avery Groner

Revision for Patrick.
I really enjoyed reading your article. The layout was easy to follow and the information that was put forth was done in an order that was easily followed. I thought that you could maybe add a bit more about the founding of the convention but other than I don't have any revisions. Well done. Noblett97 (talk) 00:09, 14 March 2020 (UTC)