User talk:Patrickjiangd

I need some feedbacks on the page I've created in my self page. It has been deleted twice, and I did a lot of work to make it better. Pls give me some specific suggestions. Thanks very much.
 * I had a look, and it looks a bit too promotional at the moment. Strip away as much as possible, and focus on what makes this specific brand notable. Keep in mind that most companies or brands aren't notable at all, so this is really what you need to work on. Although not required, article reviews will probably also go a lot faster if you can find any English language sources to use. Also remember to evaluate your sources, only use reliable sources for the article. Bjelleklang -  talk 08:16, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I've done some modification, I think the reports by ChinaDaily, Ifeng, sohu can already prove the notability of Zivarly. As for the English reference, it can be difficult because it is a Chinese local brand. Pls help me make it better.