User talk:Patton.gillian/sandbox

Looks like a good plan, the article really seems like it would benefit from it. :) Keep up the good work!

I agree with Logan that it seems like you have a good plan here, though it's probably time to start drafting some of that plan too! I also agree with Katherine that an expansion of the lede makes sense to give a better preview of the things you'll find below and that might be the place too for some further background on what the Medieval period entails (but be sure to cite that extensively!). I also wonder about the order of some of the sections. Within the 'Non-specific stress' I think some introductory sentences telling us what the anthropological significance of such indicators would be is probably called for, before we jump right into the teeth. And I think a section on adults vs. children would be a good contribution. MP Bwana Msitu (talk) 05:49, 14 October 2020 (UTC)