User talk:PaulDavid701

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Hello, PaulDavid701, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, your edit to Oklahoma City Police Department does not conform to Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View policy (NPOV). Wikipedia articles should refer only to facts and interpretations that have been stated in print or on reputable websites or other forms of media.

There's a page about the NPOV policy that has tips on how to effectively write about disparate points of view without compromising the NPOV status of the article as a whole. If you are stuck, and looking for help, please come to the New contributors' help page, where experienced Wikipedians can answer any queries you have! Or, to ask for help on your talk page, and a volunteer should respond shortly. Below are a few other good links for newcomers: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you have any questions, check out Where to ask a question or ask me on my talk page. Again, welcome! Grayfell (talk) 05:27, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
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Wikipedia and copyright
Hello PaulDavid701, and welcome to Wikipedia. Your addition to Oklahoma City Police Department has had to be removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material without permission from the copyright holder. While we appreciate your contributing to Wikipedia, there are certain things you must keep in mind about using information from your sources to avoid copyright or plagiarism issues here.


 * You can only copy/translate a small amount of a source, and you must mark what you take as a direct quotation with double quotation marks (") and a cited source. You can read about this at Non-free content in the sections on "text". See also Help:Referencing for beginners, for how to cite sources here.
 * Aside from limited quotation, you must put all information in your own words and structure, in proper paraphrase. Following the source's words too closely can create copyright problems, so it is not permitted here; see Close paraphrasing. (There is a college-level introduction to paraphrase, with examples, hosted by the Online Writing Lab of Purdue.) Even when using your own words, you are still, however, asked to cite your sources to verify information and to demonstrate that the content is not original research.
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It's very important that contributors understand and follow these practices, as policy requires that people who persistently do not must be blocked from editing. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Grayfell (talk) 09:16, 26 December 2015 (UTC)

Reliable sources
Hello. I appreciate your hard work expanding the Oklahoma City Police Department article. One of Wikipedia's core policies is that all info should be verifiable from reliable sources. This means that Wikipedia is not a platform for what's known as original research (OR). OR includes things that you may personally know, but for which you haven't provided any reliable way for someone else to double-check. You've added a lot of very useful info on OCPD, but most of the sources are just links to the main department's website: http://www.okc.gov/okcpd/ That's not really all that helpful for verifiability, since the site is large (and the site's search function doesn't seem to work all that well). I don't want to discourage you from continuing to work on the article, but please be more diligent in citing reliable sources, such as the actual pages where the information is hosted. Additionally, if you happen to be part of OCPD, you must read about having a conflict of interest: Conflict of interest (Plain and simple conflict of interest guide may also be helpful). This wouldn't mean you cannot edit, but it brings with it pitfalls you need to be aware of. Thank you again for your hard work. Grayfell (talk) 23:44, 26 December 2015 (UTC)

Disambiguation link notification for December 27
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December 2015
Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. In the future, it is recommended that you use the preview button before you save; this helps you find any errors you have made, reduces edit conflicts, and prevents clogging up recent changes and the page history. Thank you. Grayfell (talk) 10:33, 27 December 2015 (UTC)

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Please use the edit summary to explain your reasoning for the edit, or a summary of what the edit changes. Thanks! Grayfell (talk) 10:33, 27 December 2015 (UTC)

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Referencing and possible conflict of interest.
I appreciate your effort to be diligent in sourcing all statements. Redundant sources can and should be consolodated under the same name, and if a source is used multiple times to support an entire paragraph, it can generally be placed at the end of the paragraph. Having dozens and dozens of identical references peppered throughout the article doesn't help readers much, and just adds clutter. You may find Help:Referencing for beginners helpful.

You have also added massive amount of routine, flattering info to the article, as well as repeatedly tried to remove unflattering info which is well-sourced. For this reason I am going to add a boilerplate message about editing with a conflict of interest. I apologize that it's impersonal, but it's so much more comprehensive than if I tried to explain it on my own. It's very important that you understand what this means. I remind you that I am a real person, and I am more than willing to answer questions or discuss edits. Engaging on talk pages goes a long way towards assuaging fears that you're here to use Wikipedia as a WP:SOAPbox, instead of to build an encyclopedia. Do you understand what I'm saying, and understand why that's a problem? Grayfell (talk) 02:47, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest
Hello, PaulDavid701. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with some of the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest. People with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. For information on how to contribute to Wikipedia when you have a conflict of interest, see the conflict of interest guideline and frequently asked questions for organizations. In particular, please:


 * avoid editing or creating articles related to you, your organization, its competitors, or projects and products you or they are involved with;
 * instead, propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (see the template);
 * avoid linking to the Wikipedia article or website of your organization in other articles (see WP:SPAM);
 * exercise great caution so that you do not violate Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use require disclosure of your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation.

Please familiarize yourself with relevant policies and guidelines, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing, and autobiographies. Thank you. Grayfell (talk) 02:48, 4 January 2016 (UTC)