User talk:PaulRabil99/Sustainable seafood

Jeff's comments
There isn't a lot of depth here, with 2 references and ~5 sentences total. Both of your topics are a little disjointed within the full page, about the seafood industry. TEDs are closer, for sure, given the impact of bycatch. Your one example in the catfish industry, though, is very limited. What about marine systems?

Some specific edits:

- Both spearfishing and turtle exclusion devices have extensive Wikipedia pages of their own. At the least, you should link to them. In the case of spearfishing, there is info about it being both a better but also not-so-good method.

- More research to understand the broader issue within the sustainable seafood topic would be helpful - 2 refs is not adding a lot.

- " turtle bycatch has shown to be a large issue." - Awkward phrasing. "has been shown"? Better would be to be more specific than "large issue" - can you quantify its impact? Jeffcorbin518 (talk) 20:09, 20 February 2024 (UTC)