User talk:Paul W

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New Pages Patrol newsletter January 2023
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New Pages Patrol newsletter June 2023
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Thanks again, and happy editing! Paul W (talk) 17:56, 4 March 2024 (UTC)

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Draft article review
Thank you for your copyedits to my draft article Draft:Kerissa Khan. Is the draft ready to be published? As you saw, I added a "statement of interest" at the top - link to the specific edit - in order that it can be referenced in a specific box on the talkpage by the draft's reviewer (I did the same when I wrote a previous article, see: Talk:Solaris_(solar_power). Ennegma (talk) 12:24, 27 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi Ennegma. I think the article needs to be fleshed out a bit more to give some details of Khan's employment history since graduating. I see from her LinkedIn profile (not a reliable source) that she worked at Safran for over seven years - if this and other details (dates, plus some clarification over the chronology of full-time roles, voluntary roles, etc) can be sourced elsewhere, I think it will be good to go. Also citing her as the youngest RAeS Council member begs the question 'how old' (year of birth?). Paul W (talk) 13:28, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Hello user:Paul W. I too had looked at the LinkedIn profile, for other possible places to find references, but didn't find any publicly available sources for previous jobs [like Safran] other than "self-published" (like this https://twitter.com/kerissa_k/status/1020010424954163200 ) or things which were re-publications of the same text used in footnotes I have already used. I also would have liked to add more biographical details but, other than the consistently referenced fact about 'youngest', I did find in the Newsday article that "she did not reveal her age". If that's the case, then I think it's fair the biography article can use the referenced statement of "youngest council member" without also having to pry into personal details she doesn't wish to share. I would like to add more but as I've said in the "statement of interests" I've never yet talked the subject of this biography directly. Perhaps once the article is "up" then it would be possible for me to request more references, including a portrait photograph. But meanwhile, I know it's not a long or big article - but I believe that Wikipedia's minimum criteria are met already with this biography. She is the holder of an important position in her field, with matching footnotes. I don't think that the lack of detail of her earlier career or her age is an impediment to this being a valid "stub" sized article in its current state. Do you agree? Ennegma (talk) 14:05, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
 * After a bit of expansion, I have approved and published the article as a stub. Paul W (talk) 14:53, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. Now that it is public, it possible to request sources for other biographical details. Ennegma (talk) 15:03, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
 * No problem, Ennegma. In seeking additional information, remember verifiability: that "other people using the encyclopedia can check that the information comes from a reliable source": any portrait photo will normally need a Creative Commons license. Paul W (talk) 15:13, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

Page Review
Hi sir @Paul W, Hope your doing good, If Possible can you please copyedit and review this draft article Draft:Sreshth Movies. Sorry for bothering you, Thanks in advance Nss999 (talk) 16:03, 27 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi Nss999. I have done a quick copy edit. However, I don't have sufficient knowledge of Indian cinema and media to be able to adequately review the article and the reliability of its sources. Paul W (talk) 17:46, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

New Pages Patrol newsletter April 2024
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Backlog update: The October drive reduced the article backlog from 11,626 to 7,609 and the redirect backlog from 16,985 to 6,431! Congratulations to, who led with over 2,300 points.

Following that, New Page Patrol organized another backlog drive for articles in January 2024. The January drive started with 13,650 articles and reduced the backlog to 7,430 articles. Congratulations to, who achieved first place with 1,340 points in this drive.

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Request on 14:52:50, 10 April 2024 for assistance on AfC submission by Thewikibeagles
I would like to contact the Editor Paul W to see how to improve the John O. Lyle (Draft) article. Perhaps he has said all he wants, but if he would care to engage in a dialogue I would like to improve my editing and "page-making" skills for "John O. Lyle", if it can reasonably be included, but also for other future wikipedia work. thewikibeaglesThewikibeagles (talk)

Thewikibeagles (talk) 14:52, 10 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi, User:Thewikibeagles, I discovered the draft article on John O. Lyle through my activity in AfC reviews (it also grabbed my attention as I created the Wikipedia article on Saxon Tate in 2016; I also live not far from T&L's Silvertown plant). Happy to help on improvements to this and to offer other assistance as needed (in addition to being an editor, I am a volunteer Wikimedia UK accredited trainer). Best wishes. Paul W (talk) 15:32, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

John O. Lyle

 * Hello Paul! I am so delighted to see your comments. With my negligible wikipedia skills I have gone about as far as I can with the John O. Lyle page, I wonder whether you could take it on, and make it like the Saxon Tate page. I am in touch with Tim and Juiet Lyle, and indirectly with Wendy, so anything you need from them will be available. Do let me know what you think! Jonty (alias thewikibeagles)


 * Hi, Jonty / User:Thewikibeagles. During my edits of the Draft:John O. Lyle article, I obviously looked at some of the sourcing, and - as mentioned in the comment - thought "John O. Lyle, an Appreciation" looked interesting. Is this published somewhere? I imagine I might be able to find a Who's Who in my local library, but are there any other published articles about him - obituaries, maybe? Paul W (talk) 12:16, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Hi Paul, Thank you for the help. How can I get a book and "An Appreciation" to you? I would like to send them, but I am apprehensive about names and emails and so on a publicly available post. Any suggestions for establishing contact privately? Jonty PS I would like to put you in touch with Juliet and Tim if you are not already. Thewikibeagles (talk) 10:17, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Hi, Jonty / User:Thewikibeagles, if you go to my user page here, you should see in your left hand navigation an option to "Email this user". That will enable you to contact me off-wiki. Best wishes. Paul W (talk) 15:55, 29 April 2024 (UTC)

Susanna (Susi) Tegen - draft
Hi Paul W

I have made significant changes to the copy and citation of this submission, and I'm hoping this is now more suitable and acceptable as a Wikipedia article. If not, any advice you can offer specifically would be most appreciated. Thank you.

@CloeyDeb

CloeyDeb (talk) 06:04, 23 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi User:CloeyDeb. I have had another look and in my view it still doesn't include sufficient material to satisfy Wikipedia's notability criteria. I have spent some time trying to rectify some of the most serious issues - bare URL references, external links in the copy and promotional waffle - but some of the latter remains ("Tegen has ascribed her knowledge and expertise across partnerships, leadership, and public relations in health, diplomacy, education, agribusiness, primary industry, and economic development to bridge the gap between rural and urban services access." - the sentence doesn't even make sense). Several references make only passing mentions of Tegen, and the article also relies heavily on NRHA and similar employer-derived sources (unreliable). What is needed is significant coverage about her in reliable, independent, secondary sources with reputations for accuracy and fact checking. The final two references look promising (though I can't access the paywalled Australian article), but, frankly, I think I have spent enough time on trying to improve the draft. Sorry, but I have tried.... Paul W (talk) 17:09, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for trying to help. I'm currently deep diving into understanding how Wikipedia works and how I use it. I appreciate the extensive advice that you've supplied above, it helps. So thank you. I'm sure I'll get better at recognising Notability, and I'm also starting to understand more about significant coverage. What you've outline for me is great. CloeyDeb (talk) 08:38, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your kind words. Let me know if I can be of further help. Paul W (talk) 13:42, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
 * :-) CloeyDeb (talk) 03:36, 24 May 2024 (UTC)

Copyright & New Page Patrol concerns
I'm not going to template you for this, but the page Msunduzi Municipal Library recently showed up on copy patrol due to issues with WP:CLOP and blatant copying and pasting. Because, let's be clear, including full phrases such as "kicked off a train in Pietermaritzburg in an act of racial discrimination in 1893" in your edit from this site isn't just close paraphrasing.

I've warned the person who made the page & introduced the foundational copyvio, but I'm surprised that A) you apparently didn't check for copyright violations and B) you added more yourself. I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to ping @Diannaa because I see she's warned you before about close paraphrasing. I'm hoping this was just a one-time mistake, but, give the New Page Patrol aspect of the incident, I think you know why I'm concerned. GreenLipstickLesbian (talk) 21:34, 13 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks for raising your concerns, GreenLipstickLesbian. I have always been conscious of copyright issues and have tried to paraphrase as much as possible, with very occasional oversights. However, I clearly failed with the extract from the Ghandi-related news story. Apologies.
 * As I hope you will have seen from the article's history, I spent some considerable time searching for additional information from new sources and making relevant additions. I hadn't finished my work on the article and was intending to research further points and check sources when you started your interventions. I now appreciate, with the benefit of hindsight, I shouldn't have marked the page as reviewed from a NPP point of view when I did, but waited until after I'd completed my detailed audit/edit. Paul W (talk) 22:04, 13 May 2024 (UTC)


 * While I have had some of the sources still readily available in my browser tabs, I have tried to rewrite the excised content to fill the gaps created in the library's history. Paul W (talk) 22:54, 13 May 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Michael Stewart (writer, UK)
Sorry about the edit conflict: I was doing far too much in one long edit, and when I found the edit conflict I confusedly thought you were the original article creator hence my rather arrogant "think my version probably better". But I always find edit conflicts difficult to resolve, even with the supposedly-improved system. I hope you hadn't put a lot of effort into changes which disagreed with mine.

I do wonder whether the article creator has a COI - they know the birth date, which is often a worry. Their sourcing is pretty poor, the article will need a better title, etc, but the chap does seem genuinely notable: Guardian reviews etc. Pam  D  15:41, 14 May 2024 (UTC)


 * No problem, PamD. I was just doing some minor and routine tidying (I tend to jump in and address repeated single issues - like family name use - then save). I did wonder about COI too, but felt it could be an enthusiastic student. Yes, is probably notable, just needs more sources throughout.... Paul W (talk) 16:34, 14 May 2024 (UTC)

Help with request review
Hi @Paul W, I hope all is well. I am a Conflict of Interest editor who has made a request at Talk:David Adjaye, and as an editor who has contributed to the page on numerous occasions recently and has an interest in architecture, I was wondering whether you would mind assessing the changes I have put forward. Thank you! Mewedmuse (talk) 08:43, 17 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi, Mewedmuse. I have replied on the David Adjaye Talk page. (Apologies for the delayed reply there - I was away from home). Paul W (talk) 09:58, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Good afternoon @Paul W. I just wanted to say I really appreciate you taking the time to consider and implement my requested changes.
 * I have replied to one outstanding point and I look forward to hearing your opinion whenever you have the time! Mewedmuse (talk) 14:58, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Replied on Adjaye Talk page. Paul W (talk) 15:26, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

Naming references
Please note that there is no need in naming references which are only used once. GiantSnowman 14:35, 20 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Noted. I know I overdo it, but it's kind of 'belt and braces', trying to future-proof referencing where, for example, there are multiple citations of BBC Sport articles. I will refrain in other instances going forward. Best wishes. Paul W (talk) 15:06, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Lewis Nolan (footballer)
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 * Updated article with school information from published source. Paul W (talk) 13:47, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

I think you made a mistake with Draft:William Curtin
He easily passes WP:NACADEMIC:
 * h-factor of 90 which is strong for his area

I thought I should ping you first to explain as it looks like you applied the general notability criteria. The prior declination was right, but the changes up to June 10 rectified this. N.B., comments as an impartial third party. Ldm1954 (talk) 17:58, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
 * The Guggenheim is a major awards
 * Editor in chief of a journal. While perhaps not a massive one, I add to the other indications if peer recognition/notability.


 * Thanks, Ldm1954. I made an error in not looking closely enough at the Guggenheim award, while also being cautious about citations of Google Scholar scores ("... Google Scholar provide results that are more likely to be reliable sources, but only if these hits are able to be verified and are reliable sources by reading the articles or books." WP:GNUM); some examples of the reliable sources (a "Key publications" section maybe) would be a useful addition. Paul W (talk) 18:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Interpreting h-factors is tricky, see for instance the (endless) discussions at WT:Notability (academics). I, and most others I know who review academics use it as part of the proof. I also only review those where I have some knowledge so are comfortable.
 * Thanks for reverting Ldm1954 (talk) 18:38, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Curtin has been accepted
 William Curtin, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! Paul W (talk) 18:15, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mikheil Lomtadze (June 28)
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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 17:44, 28 June 2024 (UTC)


 * @Paul W, I saw you trimmed this draft before submitting, but being honest, there is a bit little to do. While every article must be written from a neutral point of view, I think, you should help clean it totally as there are many promotional tone used. That should be done before being published. I think you plan on doing that, however, I will try my cleaning and you do the rest. Cheers! Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 17:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * To be honest, User:SafariScribe, I think it needs some input from the article creator (User:Veronika.polichshuk) - perhaps some context relating to Kaspi and to reduce the refbombing about the award? I tried to do a bit of a clean-up to remove the most blatant promotional content (I was mainly interested because of the subject's UK football connection to Wycombe Wanderers - ordinarily, I wouldn't have spent so much time on a business BLP). Paul W (talk) 18:00, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I just discovered the creator has not edited for a while now, so I am taking up the draft. Thanks for your efforts thought it's appreciated. I know it may have been G11 if not for your clean up. Cheers! Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 18:03, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

History edit for ASG
Hi Paul W. I see you are a participant in WikiProject Companies/Participants so perhaps you might be interested in taking a look at an edit request I recently posted on the Talk page of Avia Solutions Group, a company associated with the aviation industry. It is an easy edit, just adding one short paragraph to the History section as an update. Thank in advance. ~ Agne for ASG (talk) 14:02, 15 July 2024 (UTC)