User talk:Pawilsong

Hello!
Hi Praycious, this is Adrian from our Global Theatre History class. I'm just stopping by to say hello! --Asbenn (talk) 13:31, 5 September 2018 (UTC)Asbenn

Hey hey
It's Toby, saying hello! --Tobymsinger (talk) 14:54, 5 September 2018 (UTC)

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Peer Review
Hey! Great article so far. I just have one grammar note before moving on. I wonder if it's worth it in the beginning of the article to say "in the specific, or, more common sense..." to really capture how people use Egungun because the phrasing was just a little unclear for me for a moment. In all, everything in the relevant is important to the topic. There wasn't anything distracting, though I wonder how the article might read if the first paragraph of the "Classification of Egungun types" can be it's own section. The second and third paragraphs seem like it's discussing a different aspect than types.

The article is neutral, and there are no bias toward anything. The citations are good, and are reliable. I don't notice anything that should be added. Great start!

Asbenn (talk) 15:36, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Asbenn

In The Wine Time by Ed Bullins moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, In The Wine Time by Ed Bullins, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs to have sections on the reception and production of the play, not just a description of the plot. Furthermore, the plot section needs to be condensed--see NOT PLOT for an explanation. . I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article  is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page.  DGG ( talk ) 05:19, 5 May 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: In The Wine Time by Ed Bullins (September 8)
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