User talk:Paynegle

Shared Reading
Importance

In this changing world or education there seems to be a constant move toward improving classroom practices in the area of literature. To be more specific

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Shared reading
I just wanted to add that the article looks a bit funny right now. I know you've just created it but you should have a couple of sentences that first say what this is (some introductory sentence like "Shared reading is an educational model of..."). Right now, the article is likely to be proposed for deletion because there is not enough context to understand what the article is supposed to be. Thanks, and again, welcome. Pascal.Tesson 03:44, 15 November 2006 (UTC)

Fixed, kinda.
Ok, that's an encyclopedia article now. I've removed the db tag. It's butchered pretty heavily, it contains most of the what section (which is highly relevant for an encyclopdeia) but not much of the why part, because an encyclopedia is typically less concerned with why things exist (except for scientific articles, "why does X happen" etc.) Is there any way you can tie the citations into the article properly? They look at the moment like they support an opinion rather than stand as citations for fact.  •E l om i s•     20:12, 15 November 2006 (UTC)