User talk:Payton.dawson/Ancient Egyptian funerary practices

Hello Payton,

I have reviewed your article edits and filled out the template. I hope it helps. I love your sandbox and I am actually going to make use of mine more as you did. I was struggling a little bit on how to use it well so thank you for that. As for your edits, I do think they were good contributions to the page. Even the little things of capitalizing the headings were useful for navigating the page. The sources you added are also great. I did include some suggestions for things to change as you continue, but I believe the biggest idea I can provide is to edit multiple pages with little edits as you did with this one. I think you will find it to be harder as you go with this page but maybe you won't!

Best, Dmitter (talk) 04:32, 19 October 2020 (UTC)Dmitter