User talk:Pdh1997/Bone density/Carlosr97 Peer Review

Carlosr97 Peer Review: I thought the genetics and prevention factors you wrote were excellent additions to the article as they can provide valuable education especially to those who are looking to learn about how their own bone density has been affected by modifiable and inherited factors.

In the prevention section, when mentioning exercise, consider comparing these exercise regimens to data about how sedentary lifestyles may lead to reduced bone density (if such research is available).

For the diet section of prevention, listing some foods/diets that do contain an adequate amount of minerals for bone health would be helpful when comparing to vegan/vegetarian diets.

For the genetics section, adding a column for incidence/prevalence would add more info about epidemiology of these genetic conditions.

Overall great job :)