User talk:Pdietry/sandbox

This is where the peer review feedback for Pdietry's sandbox draft content should be posted. Be sure to sign your post and complete the Canvas quiz to receive credit for your work.

Luz Areli Peer Review
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes, content is neutral and unbiased.

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Both are primary articles, but since this is broad information on TSH it should be okay.

Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes, citations are formatted correctly.

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes, I especially like the section where you describe what tissues it affects.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? I think that the regulation section is pretty bare and could use some contribution.

LuzAreliContreras (talk) 23:10, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

Shania Khalid Peer Review
Peer review questions

Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes, the content is written in an unbiased and neutral tone. Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes, the citations follow the MEDRS guidelines. Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes, the citations are formatted correctly. Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes, it would make sense to add these new piece of information to the proposed article. Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? Maybe they can add some information about any disease relating to the thyroid stimulating hormone(TSH).

Shania KhalidShania1451 (talk) 23:30, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review Questions

Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes they do.

Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes.

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes both parts would be great contribution to the article.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? History of TSH? DK201 (talk) 04:04, 23 November 2020 (UTC)