User talk:Pedantical/Archive 5

Edits in Adriana Caselotti article
I was wondering how we should regard some recent edits by 148.255.228.186  in the Adriana Caselotti article? Thanks. Garagepunk66 (talk) 20:13, 19 June 2023 (UTC)Garagepunk66 (talk) 20:12, 19 June 2023 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure. It seems like the edit war didn't go back-and-forth more than a couple times, so it seems like it's good for now... maybe? :)
 * – Pedantical (talk) 02:56, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I was thinking that it looked like an edit war, but I wanted to know how other editors more familiar with the article view the situation. I hope that it cools down. Thanks and good luck! Garagepunk66 (talk) 03:39, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Freya Holmér (April 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Zxcvbnm was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Freya Holmér and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Freya_Holm%C3%A9r Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Zxcvbnm&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Freya_Holm%C3%A9r reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 14:30, 30 April 2023 (UTC)

The Signpost: 17 July 2023
 * Read this Signpost in full * Single-page * Unsubscribe * MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 09:01, 17 July 2023 (UTC)

Women in Red 8th Anniversary
--Lajmmoore (talk) 11:01, 18 July 2023 (UTC) via MassMessaging

Women in Red
Hi there, Pedantical, and thanks for developing women's biographies. I also see you have run into problems with a recent draft. You might find it useful to become a member of WikiProject Women in Red where we are trying to chip away at the gender gap. If you are interested, you can sign up under "New registratations" on WikiProject Women in Red/New members. Happy editing!--Ipigott (talk) 09:10, 17 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Glad to see you signed up. So welcome to the project! You might find it useful to look at some of our essays, perhaps starting with our Ten Simple Rules. Please let me know if you run into any difficulties or need assistance. Happy editing!--Ipigott (talk) 19:45, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi!
 * Thanks for the nudge! I meant to send a little bop back over to you—I really appreciate the invite!
 * WP:WIRED was the first WikiProject to really catch my eye, and I’m glad to say that I’ve helped draft and publish two articles so far in the spirit of the project, and hopefully a third published soon (Draft:Freya Holmér was just resubmitted for re-review!).
 * If you have any feedback for improvements to that particular article, I’d be happy to tack more changes on before it is reviewed.
 * Thanks for the tips as well.
 * Best, Pedantical (talk) 19:52, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * I'm no expert on video games but at first sight it seems to me that some of the sources you have used are primary or close to primary rather than independent secondary sources. Interviews and sites closely related to the subject should be avoided. You should base the article on information you have found on reliable independent sources and make sure each paragraph contains at least one citation. If you make adjustments along these lines, I would be happy to take a new look at the article. Hope this helps.--Ipigott (talk) 08:21, 19 July 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Freya Holmér (July 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by OceanHok was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Freya Holmér and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Freya_Holm%C3%A9r Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:OceanHok&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Freya_Holm%C3%A9r reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

OceanHok (talk) 11:30, 24 July 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: X Holdings Corp. (July 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by PK650 was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:X Holdings Corp. and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:X_Holdings_Corp. Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:PK650&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:X_Holdings_Corp. reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

PK650 (talk) 04:07, 26 July 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: X Holdings Corp. (July 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DreamRimmer was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:X Holdings Corp. and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:X_Holdings_Corp. Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:DreamRimmer&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:X_Holdings_Corp. reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

 𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛  𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜  18:41, 26 July 2023 (UTC)

Women in Red August 2023
--Lajmmoore (talk) 19:26, 28 July 2023 (UTC) via MassMessaging

The Signpost: 1 August 2023
 * Read this Signpost in full * Single-page * Unsubscribe * MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 03:38, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

The Signpost: 15 August 2023
 * Read this Signpost in full * Single-page * Unsubscribe * MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 14:17, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

September 2023 at Women in Red
--Victuallers (talk) 16:59, 25 August 2023 (UTC) via MassMessaging

The Signpost: 31 August 2023
 * Read this Signpost in full * Single-page * Unsubscribe * MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 00:44, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

The Signpost: 16 September 2023
 * Read this Signpost in full * Single-page * Unsubscribe * MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 04:37, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

Women in Red October 2023
--Lajmmoore (talk) 10:54, 29 September 2023 (UTC) via MassMessaging