User talk:Pedrososof/sandbox

Pre-peer review comments
A few quick thoughts:
 * The overall structure and content of this article look strong.
 * It is both appropriate, and necessary for an academic encyclopedia entry, to go into some detail on the contents and major arguments of Trouillot's principal works. Compare, for example, Benedict Anderson.
 * By convention, the biography section is chronological, so the death description should be in final subsection.
 * All section headings should be formatted using heading/subheading formatting (a pull-down menu in the visual editor) rather than with bold or italics.
 * This sentence is missing something, and should not be attributed to the person being described: "Trouillot emerged as an academic and anthropology within American anthropology Sciences"
 * "the first book written in Haitian Creole" is a strong claim. It's more likely that it was "the first book in Haitian Creole published…" (perhasp in some particular context) rather than the first book written in Haitian Creole. But check the source and be precise.
 * His role as "director of the Institute for Global Studies in Culture, Power, and History and Krieger/Eisenhower Distinguished Professor of Anthropology at Johns Hopkins University" should be included and cited.

I'm glad this is shaping up so well.--Carwil (talk) 19:24, 22 March 2019 (UTC)

Transferring to article space
I saw that your complete replace was reverted at Michel-Rolph Trouillot. Don't be discouraged: whole article replaces are often rejected by people who don't see some part of it as an improvement. I recommend checking over and copyediting the version you have, responding to peer review suggestions, and then transferring it in paragraph by paragraph so it doesn't all get reverted at once.--Carwil (talk) 18:52, 15 April 2019 (UTC)