User talk:Peisong

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Peisong's Peer Review
- I would elaborate a little bit more on what qubits are. I don't think its known to the general public what they or what they can do. You could do this in the first paragraph, or in the specified "Qubit" section of "Requirements for quantum computation."

- The "two qubit entanglement gates" section could definitely be elaborated on. You should probably explain what entanglement is, and why it is important in terms of improving the capability of computers. To people who don't have a strong background in physics, entanglement is probably a fairly abstract idea, so you might want to speak more about that.

- I know there isn't a lot of history behind trapped ion computers as they aren't utilized in practice yet, but I think you guys could speak a little bit about some of the theoretical improvements made in quantum theory that have lead to the idea of trapped ion computers Jonnyelias (talk) 02:55, 8 December 2018 (UTC)