User talk:Penandkeys

I'm new to Wikipedia. I love it and got into editing one of the entries that came up to help newbies familiarize themselves. I improved it but not sure I did it right, hoping someone can maybe critique what I did?

The page is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yeshivat_Nahariya • I didn't use Wiki markup tool or the signature and timestamp (realized that later - is that a big issue?). • I improved the lead and brought in a media source and a map as part of brining more context but the page is obviously posted by the org. Is there anything an editor can do about that? • I took out links in the text, like 'army', 'community', 'food' and other self-explanatory words that linked to their Wiki definitions. That's ok, right?? • I noticed at the top of the page there are the notes to editors about what's wrong/missing. Should I delete an item if I think I fixed it or does someone else review the edits and take it out? • And a bit too late I realized I should prob have worked in the sandbox area. Should I have just copied the whole article into the sandbox and worked on it there? • and the four tildes to sign… with my user name? before? after? alone? Sorry for the stupid questions...

Thanks! Penandkeys (talk) 20:34, 8 January 2014 (UTC) penandkeysPenandkeys (talk) 20:34, 8 January 2014 (UTC)