User talk:Penbat/legal abuse

Initial suggestions
The edits I described as initial suggestions in the edit summary are meant as suggestions rather than the usual purpose of an edit. Everything that was there which I changed is commented out rather than deleted. The things I added are really meant as raw material for you to do with as you see fit.

I put in the template to mark the article as being developed in userspace and the banner calling for more citations because much of what I entered needs them.

References to the home page of Legal Victim Assistance Advocates would probably get spiked by reviewers as promotional. However, there is a News and Resources page there that has useful information and might not be seen as promotional. I was able to find a pretty good reference for Karin Huffer's Legal Abuse Syndrome, so that's in the Further reading.

Some items, like the books in Further reading, were converted to use the template. Otherwise the information is the same.

Also, two categories were added. Rhsimard (talk) 03:08, 28 June 2011 (UTC)

Update
I did some work with references. It turns out the everything that was in Further reading was useful as a reference. That leaves nothing for Further reading or External links, so those sections are gone at the moment. Rhsimard (talk) 04:23, 28 June 2011 (UTC)