User talk:Penelope.Collins

Welcome!
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Some advice
Articles, especially biographies, usually begin with something like "Personalia Person was a this-that-or-the-other" followed by a brief summary of why this person is notable (the lede). See WP:MOS for a few pointers. Happy editing. Kleuske (talk) 14:07, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Patricia Ryan (Choreographer) (June 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrStrauss was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Dr Strauss  talk  09:35, 30 June 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Patricia Ryan (Choreographer) (July 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Patricia Ryan (Choreographer) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the or on the.
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

SwisterTwister  talk  23:11, 28 July 2017 (UTC)

Draft:Patricia Ryan (Choreographer) concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Patricia Ryan (Choreographer), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:32, 8 January 2018 (UTC)