User talk:Penny Ho Lane

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Lane Crawford
Thank you for adding material and citations to the article Lane Crawford. Some of it sounds too promotional for an encyclopedia article. If any of it has been copied from an external article, this would have to be removed or rewritten anyway. Please would you have another go, before someone deletes what you have done as WP:SPAM? – Fayenatic  L ondon 14:43, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking some steps in this direction but, in my opinion as an experienced editor, you did not go nearly far enough. I have removed several chunks which were full of branding jargon that was not suitable for an encyclopedia article. I also put back some material which you had deleted without explanation.


 * Please also add citations for the remaining information that you added, e.g. the other group companies, and being the first omni-channel retailer. – Fayenatic  L ondon 20:36, 1 November 2013 (UTC)