User talk:Pensfan044

Recent edits to Whiteout (Penn State)
Hello, thank you for working to enhance Wikipedia through your contributions. I've noticed a couple of changes you've made to the page 'Whiteout (Penn State)' have contained somewhat redundant sentence structure and grammatical issues. The additions were also unsourced and of questionable relevance. While the former issues have been resolved, please thoroughly read through edits and contributions before submitting them to ensure grammatical accuracy and concise wording. Often it helps to read sections aloud once or twice. As for the latter concerns, if you could provide sources it would increase the chances that these contributions end up staying on the page. Thank you and have a good day.

Recent edits to NHL Winter Classic
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that you made a change to an article, NHL Winter Classic, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so! If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you! Materialscientist (talk) 09:26, 27 February 2017 (UTC)