User talk:Perillanova/sandbox

I really liked how organized everything was. Your draft already practically looks like a Wikipedia page, and provides a lot of information. Elodieme (talk) 14:45, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

Your article is super organized like mine as well! I definitely think we should add more about the life cycle to the article for our final draft. I also think we can add more about the specific classifications of this parasite. Do you think we could find some information about the pathology in the primary hosts (like pigs and monkeys)? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Myastone16 (talk • contribs) 00:32, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

Hi! Great draft! It is very well written! I have some very minor edits: - Add the word 'is" after "E. polecki is found primarily in pigs and monkeys and" - Add a comma after "It is considered to be a zoonotic parasite" and "Recent studies suggest that different subspecies infect non-human primates and pigs" - Is it generally pathogenic to its other hosts even if it isn't in humans? Agleichsner (talk) 16:15, 9 April 2018 (UTC)