User talk:PerkinsonSC/Challis Volcanics

4/2/2021 Edited the structure of the lead by making two sentences out of one which explained both the naming convention and composition of the unit. There is now a sentence for the naming convention and one for the composition.

Edited where the second phase of volcanism was described as multiple phases of eruptions because the double use of the word phase sounded redundant. Now the sentence describes the second phase as a period of eruptions. This has better flow.

Changed the fossil content section to describe the Challis Volcanics as a formation with a fossil bearing unit rather than being a unit itself. This is because the Challis Volcanics is a formation, not a unit. Karcherrk (talk) 18:41, 2 April 2021 (UTC)