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'''Sex trafficking in Thailand


 * If possible you could capitalize "trafficking" in the title - but not sure if Wikipedia will let you make this change.


 * There are a couple of run on sentences which I commented about on your paper, so maybe just take a look at those.


 * I like the explanation about the different labor sectors men and boys work in depending on their ethnicity. These types of examples are helpful for the reader to create some context and solidify what you are talking about.


 * I think you could expand more on the sentences where you talk about the rates of police violence towards men and boys because this is a difference between men and women that is unique to male trafficking.


 * You could also expand more about why scholars critique publications about men and boys claiming they focus too much on HIV/AIDS. This is an interesting critique which could use some more explanation.

'''Thailand


 * The history of the informal economy is very interesting and through but I wonder if you could integrate some of this information into the general economy section. This would ensure that the informal economy isn't taking up too much space in the article as a whole.


 * Other than that this article looks really great!