User talk:Perrone.h/new sandbox

Beiyu (Pam) Lin's Peer Review
What does the article (or section) do well? I think that Haley does a really nice job covering many different aspects of maternal mortality. She is still in the early works, but she has many articles and facts about various parts of the topic: different countries' histories, shows about it, etc. I also really like that she plans on reading a book about the subject, as it will give her more expertise on the subject.

What changes would you suggest overall? The only changes I would suggest in these early stages regard some of the sources that Haley plans on using. One of them comes from "Daily Mail", so I don't believe that this could be a credible source. Other than that, just making sure that she rewords some of the direct quotes she pulled from sources and avoid plagiarism.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Again, just the source credibility and plagiarism. If we're just focusing on what she has right now, the only major red flag would be the article from Daily Mail.

'''Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!''' I think that by seeing Haley's wide variety of sources, it makes me want to add more detail and source back-up to my own article! She is on her way to creating a very well thought out Wikipedia article.