User talk:PervaizAkh

Waqar Ehsin moved to draftspace
I'm copying this here for you - it was originally posted to the talk page of the editor who started the article.

Waqar Ehsin, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption.

Also, there's a huge amount of overtly promotional and WP:PEACOCK language int he article at the moment, which needs to be removed.

When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please follow the confirms on the Articles for Creation template atop the page. Elmidae (talk · contribs) 15:12, 9 July 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Waqar Ehsin (July 13)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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KJP1 (talk) 07:12, 13 July 2018 (UTC)