User talk:Peryalacoirea

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Bir Kiseiba Peer Review
Hello Peryalacoirea it's me (AmaranthRose (talk)) So it looks like you started a new page which is good, keep going with the new information. I would recommend as you get more done with your article that you keep the same dating types. So since you use b.c. already then I would keep using that, not BCE or x years ago just so that it is all the same because sometimes that can be confusing. The other thing I have questions about are the two sentences about Measurements and Mitochondrial DNA which seem kind of out of place. Are you going to eventually put them under a different header? That's all for now (AmaranthRose (talk)) —Preceding undated comment added 14:09, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
1.	Need more than 2 references. Two is probably not enough to write a whole article about.

2.	Find more pages that can link to yours. Look for categories that it can be added to (like the archaeological sites in Egypt one). The more pages that link to it the more it will be viewed by people.

3.	Obviously, there will be more presented in the final version, but in particular I would recommend adding a section about the significance of the site (why do we care?).

4.	More wikilinks. (Ex. wikilink "aurochs"; If you don’t define what something fairly obscure is, it is probably a good idea to link it.)

Overall, I think that this is definitely a good base from which to expand off of. Like I said before, keep adding/trying to find more sources. The more that you have, the easier it gets to write the whole article. If you haven’t already, plan and formulate what the structure of the final ‘draft’ of the article will be. Getting the basic structure down will help a lot. Keep gathering sources and adding. I look forward to reading this page as it comes closer to completion.

Esuabeht97 (talk) 05:19, 16 November 2016 (UTC)