User talk:Pesanskym/sandbox/draft

Winnerevu's Comments on Your Wonderful Work
Try and find a way to change the quote into a paraphrased statement; I think it would help the writing flow better.

Peer Review The use of more references can help the reader understand more about the topic at hand and can also add more content to your work. By adding a more in-depth detail of the subject it can also help create a much better flow for the reader to follow the paragraph. Therearenogods (talk) 12:45, 1 November 2018 (UTC)