User talk:Petbravo42/sandbox

Based on your sandbox history it doesn't look like you've done too much work in here. Maybe you could get started by choosing a section of the article that seems weak to you and adding to it or revising it. Your article's really long so if I were you I would probably be overwhelmed by looking at the whole thing. If I were you I would start by focusing on one section and see where it goes. It also really helped me to put notes in my own words in my sandbox so that when I went to add to the article all my information was right there. --Caitmcn (talk) 21:13, 25 November 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I agree with the advice on note taking too. I also think it might be helpful to reorganize the structure of the article so that there are less long blocks of text. It was really helpful for me to look at some of the highly rated pages on the wiki-project for sociology. It looks like you still have quite a bit of work to do, so my best advice is just to take it all step by step. Maybe look over the current sources and do what caitmcn suggested and write notes in your own words. Then I would suggest expanding your sources from there. Good Luck! --Rbareiss (talk) 08:18, 28 November 2011 (UTC)