User talk:Pete43040

Your submission at Articles for creation: Professor R.A. Olson (April 13)
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Dan arndt (talk) 14:00, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Professor R.A. Olson (April 13)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:

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EROS message 17:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Help me!
Please provide examples of what I need to edit to make my article acceptable. Please help me with... Pete43040 (talk) 16:39, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Pete43040 (talk) 16:39, 16 April 2018 (UTC) Gary Peterson
 * Talk to the reviewers (that's why their talk page is linked at the top of the review banner). As a start you must use in-line references - see WP:CITE Ron h jones (Talk) 18:27, 16 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Wikipedia content should be based on what reliable sources that are independent of the subject report on it. None of your draft's sources are independent; all the papers seem to be authored or co-authored by Olson. And I rather doubt they back up much of the information in the draft anyway. Where does the rest come from? How can our readers verify it? Have newspapers or reputable magazines reported on Olson in some detail? Then you could maybe use those reports as sources. Huon (talk) 18:42, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

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