User talk:Petesimon2

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History of Science, College Course at OU Norman
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Chosen article to improve

 * Corpuscular Theory of Light
 * Bibliography (list of relevant sources)
 * see Talk page for Corpuscular Theory of Light
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Review of two articles of other student in my college course/class
I will review two of the articles shown on my course's page. Here is a Guide to reviewing of articles in Wikipedia, on Wikipedia. My professor suggests that we students perform a "copy-edit" kind of review of the articles. There is another copy-edit guide here.

Comment from the professor of my History of Science course

 * Hi. These all seem like interesting topics.  I don't know anything about Maatkare Mutemhat, so I'm curious about the connection with HSCI (as opposed to history more broadly).  There should be plenty of sources for each of these, so I'll leave the final choice up to you.  Thanks, Kirwanfan (talk) 19:12, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

review from loured36
Hey Petesimon2, I've reviewed your article today, so I'll let you know what I think! I'll start off with easy things like grammar and organization:
 * In your first sentence, a comma will make it more clear: In optics, the corpuscular theory of light, arguably set forward by Pierre Gassendi and Thomas Hobbes, states that light...
 * This mechanical philosophy was based on Epicureanism and his atomism, in which everything in the universe, including a person's body, mind, soul, even thoughts were made of atoms--very small particles of moving matter...
 * Gassendi tried to explain aspects of matter and natural phenomenon of the world in terms of atoms and the void. --I'm not sure why this is italicized... be sure to use " for quotation marks and '' for italicized (two separate apostrophe's)
 * Be sure your source on your list in the section on Gassendi is attached to the end of the list and not the front of the next sentence.
 * Corpuscularian theories, or corpuscularianism, are similar to the theories of atomism, except that atoms were thought to be indivisible, while corpuscles could in principle be divided.
 * In your section on Isaac Newton, it is probably best to refer to the theory by name at the start, rather than beginning with "it was largely developed by Newton..."
 * are the two listed items after the quote from Einstein supposed to be part of the quote? they seem tacked on the end, and the origin of them is not apparent.

The information you have is good, though you could probably elaborate on the conflict between wave and particle theories more. I think you could use more pictures on the upper part of the article; it seems a little bare at the moment. I like the organization of the article as a whole, though there are some small issues with location of citations and bullet points, but those are not hard to fix. It would be nice to see the introduction filled out a little more, so it gives a more complete idea of the theory and leads the reader into the rest of the article.

Altogether, the article looks pretty nice. Another week of tuning up and you'll be in great shape! Keep up the good work! Loured36 (talk) 04:10, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

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I've edited the links in the Red Army Standard Ammunition article to reflect my real intent, going to the English language and Russian language pages respectively. Petesimon2 (talk) 21:09, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

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rename the article
rename the article User:Панн/Volga State University of Water Transport --Панн (talk) 09:13, 20 August 2018 (UTC)

These corpuscles are perfectly elastic, rigid, and weightless.[7]
Hi Pete I was looking in the Opticks and I can't find the quote above for which Opticks is given as a reference. In fact I can't find any exposition of a corpuscular theory of light. He refers to rays, and his ideas are compatible with a particle theory, and studiously avoid taking up any wave theory, but no sign of corpuscles of light. Steve 1635 (talk) 13:48, 10 July 2020 (UTC)