User talk:Peytonw27/Box jellyfish

Peyton, Somehow you did not get assigned peer reviewers. So, I will review your article.

Overall you did a good job. You added a lot of good information to the article, but be careful not to repeat information. You need to specify to what section you are adding each piece of information. Nice addition of an image, but you also need in text citations and to add links to other Wikipedia pages. Watch your spelling. Your references are formatted incorrectly. Whiteamphipod (talk) 20:24, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Dr. White's critique of your first draft
The scientific name of the box jellyfish is Cubozoa [already in article] and it is invertebrate that has an average life span of 1 year. The box jellyfish can average up to 10 inches wide and 10 feet long and weigh up to 4.4 pounds. The toxin found in the box jellyfish has a toxin which is one of the strongest to be found in nature. The box jellyfish venom contains toxins which will attack the heart, nervous system, and skin cells if ever used in an attack. Surviors of the sting can have experiences of considerable pain that can last up to weeks in this often leaves significant scarring from where the tentacles have made contact. Article body

References References are formatted incorrectly. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/animals/invertebrates/facts/box-jellyfish https://oceanservice.noaa.gov/facts/box-jellyfish.html Arruda, G. L. M., Vigerelli, H., Bufalo, M. C., Longato, G. B., Veloso, R. V., Zambelli, V. O., Picolo, G., Cury, Y., Morandini, A. C., Marques, A. C., & Sciani, J. M. (2021). Box Jellyfish (Cnidaria, Cubozoa) Extract Increases Neuron’s Connection: A Possible Neuroprotector Effect. BioMed Research International, 2021, 8855248. https://doi.org/10.1155/2021/8855248 Pirkle, C. M., & Yanagihara, A. A. (2019). Insights in Public Health: Trapped in a Sea of Uncertainty: Limitations in Unintentional Injury Research in the Philippines and Interdisciplinary Solutions to Reduce Fatal Box Jellyfish Stings. Hawai’i Journal of Medicine & Public Health : A Journal of Asia Pacific Medicine & Public Health, 78(1), 30–34. Sathirapongsasuti, N., Khonchom, K., Poonsawat, T., Pransilpa, M., Ongsara, S., Detsri, U., Bungbai, S., Lawanangkoon, S.-A., Pattanaporkrattana, W., & Trakulsrichai, S. (2020). Rapid and Accurate Species-Specific PCR for the Identification of Lethal Chironex Box Jellyfish in Thailand. International

'''Overall you did a good job. You added a lot of good information to the article, but be careful not to repeat information. You need to specify to what section you are adding each piece of information. Nice addition of an image, but you also need in text citations and to add links to other Wikipedia pages. Watch your spelling. ''' Whiteamphipod (talk) 16:26, 22 October 2021 (UTC)