User talk:Phaedrapa/sandbox

Comments 1. I think your plan to add a "History" section would be a great addition to the page. I noticed that you want to include information about films participating in the festival. Is there a source that readily captures this information? I noticed that some film festivals have websites so maybe that might be a good source to add. It also might be helpful to organize their information into a table (ex. columns for year, title of movie, director, run time, etc).

2. The draft is a solid start. I think you do a great job maintaining an encyclopedic tone in line with other Wikipedia articles. One comment I would make is on the last sentence about the purpose of the KQFF. I think stating the purpose as a quote might be a safer way to go as the sentence might be interpreted as an opinion of what the purpose is if it isn't explicity quoted off, say, the film festival's website. Otherwise, based on your plan, I think your path towards exploring the details of the festival is very productive!

Suggestions

1. In the "References" section, I noticed that some articles state the day that the source was accessed. This would be great to add if you still have the access date to the sources you used.

2. Formatting the Wikipedia article was kind of difficult when I was editing. I definitely suggest making use of the formatting bar that sits at the top of the sandbox. The "Heading" button ensures that your sections fall in line with Wikipedia formatting standards so I definitely found it helpful.

3. In other film festival pages, I noticed that some authors chose to include content from film critics that attended. I'm not sure if there are sources out there from film critics and their opinions (especially in English), but if you were able to find them, I think it would be a great addition to your section on reaction from the public.

4. I think instead of naming a section "Reaction to the Public", it might be easier to simply name the section "Reception" and then make subsections for critical reception (from critics), public reception, or even "Reception in Korea" vs "International Reception" if there is information available.

Vwang2019 (talk) 16:03, 22 November 2018 (UTC) Vivian Wang