User talk:Phalanx0032/sandbox

1. I would make the project changes into its own section instead of a subsection, with each major change as a subsection (or each phases changes if that makes more sense)

2. The construction section should focus more on the actual build of the rail instead of the cost in my opinion (Those figures can be put into history or a different section)

3. There is an opportunity to make a large table that breaks down who did which project and how much it cost

4. If you can find a map of where the rail will go that shows which sections you are talking about, that would also be helpful

Zach Feigelson

Weishing Review
Overall great edits, the new article is very organized and easy to digest. The "Project History" section could be broken up more but the new "Construction" section should fix most of that. Weishing (talk) 21:14, 18 November 2019 (UTC)Weishing