User talk:Pheerathat

Your submission at Articles for creation: Thailand Royal Rainmaking Project (October 18)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 18:39, 18 October 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Thailand Royal Rainmaking Project has been accepted
 Thailand Royal Rainmaking Project, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:45, 4 November 2016 (UTC)
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Reccommended improvements to Thailand Royal Rainmaking Project
Hello, your draft has been published, but I recommend the following improvements:


 * Are you sure 1995 is the start date? Do you have a source you can cite for that? The PRD sees to say it's 1955: http://thailand.prd.go.th/ewt_news.php?nid=2363&filename=index
 * Note that while English sources are prefered on en.wikipedia, if you can only prove an important fact using a Thai source, that is also acceptable
 * If this concept began in 1969, why is it only in 1995 that the Project began? Can you clarify the history, like is it just 1995 that it took on its current name?
 * Right after the English name at the beginning, please provide the Thai name in parentheses
 * It appears a few foreign countries are copying this technique (Jordan?). Maybe add those to Recognition section
 * Is there a logo/emblem for the program? If so, the only correct way to add it to the article is using the "Upload file" button on the left side of your screen, and you must click the options that describe the logo as a Copyright Logo being used under WP:Fair use. Let me know if you have any trouble uploading the image.

Great work, was this a project for school? Very interesting topic, but it would be even better if you expand it slightly, and that may require using some references to Thai-language sources. MatthewVanitas (talk) 21:03, 4 November 2016 (UTC)