User talk:Phiafornature/sandbox

Article Evaluation From reading the "Water in California" page, the main thing I noticed that needed to be addressed was the lack of mention of the Orange County Water District's Groundwater Replenishment System. After we read about this in our textbook, I was somewhat surprised to see that it wasn't covered at all in the wiki page, as it seems to be a historic achievement concerning water reuse in California. A couple areas in the article seemed like they needed to be updated, with their data from August 2017, but that was addressed by someone else who viewed the page. The author(s) maintained a neutral tone through most of it as well, with only a couple areas being somewhat emotive. Conversely, I may have found them to be emotive as I have strong opinions regarding water allocation within the state, so I may have just been experiencing a wave of my own bias. Overall, I think that the page did a fairly good job at briefly covering a great deal of the water issues in California, though anyone would be hard pressed to make a comprehensive document. Phiafornature (talk) 00:24, 13 February 2018 (UTC)