User talk:Philippagrinblat/sandbox

Hi, I assume you are affiliated with SEEK Learning in some way (you should declare this wp:COI. This is OK but I think you need to tone down your article. It is I think too detailed and ad like for wp. Think about what a genuine third party may be interested in in a company of only 200 or so people from Australia (a company which is only a few years old). I have deleted a couple of sections which didn't add much. I think you should add some links to the article to give it more robustness. Good luck with your wp editing. Cheers XcommR (talk) 10:32, 7 December 2012 (UTC)