User talk:Phillcollins101/sandbox

Peer Review

This topic seems extremely obscure and difficult to research so I commend you for being able to make any edits at all! This article does a great job of organizing information. I like that it was structured based off of country because it made it very easy to navigate. I am impressed by your attention to detail surrounding the pre-existing information. The fact that you noticed that "tinholo" was not defined in the "Mozambique" category shows that you scanned the article with a close eye and searched for any way that you could contribute. I suggest that you beef up the article in any way possible, because I feel that the article is very scarce. The most important thing that you could do is expand upon the information that already exists, since I do not think that it is worth spending time on developing a category for another country. Again, I am very impressed by the structure of this Wikipedia page and I am going to try to incorporate some of that structure into my own article! Have fun editing!

Icechrome (talk) 03:36, 14 May 2019 (UTC)