User talk:PhoenixSpoor/sandbox

Hey! It looks like you have a very good and well thought out plan here. Personally, I am interested in how exactly queerness and disability are related, I think that would be very interesting to define and/or delve into. Both are groups that face adversity and that have suffered ostracism. I also think it would make a fascinating angle were queerness being treated like a disability a topic of discussion. Like conversion camps and how people try to "fix" queerness as though it is a disability. I think that also provides for a unique perspective into how people with disabilities are treated/viewed. Those are just my thoughts, you could also just stick with what you already have outlined. Good work!

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You have a lot of good material here, Phoenix--perhaps too much. I encourage you to just choose one or two of the edits you say you could make and get them drafted here. In skimming the article, the invisibility of intersecting identities seems like it could use development if your sources offer new perspectives on that, though any of the ones you mention could be good. Also, there are a number of places where evidence from research needs to be offered and it seems you have plenty of that to share. --Jbdolphin (talk) 06:30, 13 May 2021 (UTC) a lot of well written material, overall very good. Irina.voz (talk) 19:27, 14 May 2021 (UTC)