User talk:Piatigda/sandbox

The article is really good and you use the wikipedia tone throughout your contributions steadily. The one thing I would do is add another source. The way you use the ones you have is great, but if you look at a wikipedia article the authors are just peppering you with facts, and it can never hurt to have many sources to back up your claims.

Overall, everything looks good. My main suggestion is for you to make sure you are citing all of the facts. Also I would recommend that you possibly add another source. But overall, everything is very clear and concise. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aagodoy (talk • contribs) 16:36, 19 April 2018 (UTC)