User talk:Pierre.Guirguis/sandbox

Hi Pierre! Your topic has the potential to cover a huge amount of information, but I like that you’ve pulled in your direct intent in the first couple of sentences. This topic would be a good quick reference guide to a professional new or unfamiliar working with Natural History collections. It might be interesting to pull in a few current conservation/restoration projects happening in natural history collections like: http://hmnh.harvard.edu/news/glass-flowers-gallery-open-may-21-2016-harvard-museum-natural-history A few sections seemed to be more developed than others. Could smaller sections be combined to form sections together? Formatting wise, check main header styles, some are not consistent (1 is not bolded, 2 is). The “Correct conditions for storage” section could be enhanced by adding a few images of proper storage techniques/examples. --KatyAleecia37 (talk) 09:47, 17 February 2017 (UTC)

Pierre, I think you've done a great job with your topic. One suggestion that I have is to make the distinctions between subtitles and headers clearer (changing the sizes). You've picked a really broad topic, so I can also see areas where it might be good to define what your areas are (e.g. what constitutes invertebrates?). I would also consider matching the "Types of objects" with the items that you list, just so things are really clear. --BethanyJ7 (talk) 19:40, 18 February 2017 (UTC)