User talk:PierrePetite

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OK I've had another look. The text isn't too promotional, but it's survival wasn't helped by the poster using a promotional user name which breached our policies. Although you also have an obvious conflict of interest when it comes to editing articles about this subject, at least you don't get an indefinite block.

I will post the text here shortly because it still needs some work.

 Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  11:10, 9 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm not convince that it meets the notability guidelines. It seems to have got audience support at a conference that doesn't appear notable enough for its own article. Also membership to the “Silicon Valley Accelerator Program”. there is no link, or explanation, I have no idea what the significance is of this or the award.
 * The text should be entirely in English. Also bear in mind that English capitalises less than the German. basically just proper nouns.
 * You have done a good job of formatting the references, but I don't know why you have repeated the url some of them, not necessary. Also add in German) to refs that are not in English
 * Avoid single-sentence sections


 * You can sign your comments on talk pages automatically using four tildes ~ I made these edits, a mixture of MoS, copy editing and generally tidying. You seem to have donated the logo to Commons for anyone to use for any purpose (including commercial use on en-wiki, although not de-wiki). If that was not your intention, you need to request speedy deletion of the Commons image, and to upload on each of the language Wikipedias separately. On en-wiki you will need a fair-use rationale or to state that there are no copyright issues because the image is simple geometrical shapes that cannot be copyrighted.  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  18:55, 9 December 2013 (UTC)