User talk:Piesquared93/sandbox

Strong start, looks good! Obviously more to do, but two immediate comments: Get rid of weasel words ("various") and increase the citation density (you can cite one item more than once in your text). Also, check to see if the footnote superscript comes before or after the period. And link key nouns in your article to existing wiki articles. Comtebenoit (talk) 04:18, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

- Some great work here, well done! I've added some tags to draw your attention to areas for improvement. Comtebenoit (talk) 21:04, 13 June 2014 (UTC)

- Looking very good! Not sure if those quaternary and holocene boxes are suitable here, better take them off. Do fix the spots I've marked with an edit tag... Comtebenoit (talk) 04:58, 15 June 2014 (UTC)

- Great job fixing the tagged spots, well done!
 * I'm not sure about those external links, you're just going to other encyclopedia-like articles, and they are not especially authoritative or useful. See here for guidelines on external links: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:External_links#What_can_normally_be_linked
 * one more tag added