User talk:Pittarchy

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Hello, Pittarchy, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Dear Sarah, This is Sarah! I am doing your peer-review this week. To begin, I thought you picked a really cool article, and I am excited for where you are going to take it. I saw you added 2 citations, and you made an outline of what you wanted to add to your article (this was in your sandbox). Good start!

This is what I liked: - Good citations - Good bibliography (you have over 40 sources) - No typos in the article

This is what I think could be improved: - The lead is quite weak and doesn't summarize what the article is about. Could you add a better intro sentence? - You said you plan to add a whole section on deathways. I think that is great. I would add it in the final part of the article. - I think you could add a whole section on archaeological ethics, just like we learned in class. I would cite Kennewick Man here. - I think this page could be improved by adding a few pictures. I would get some off Wikimedia commons. Do you know how to do that? I can show you. - Be careful in the 2nd section. I think one of the paragraphs sounds biased to me. Could you rewrite it so it sounds neutral? - I checked all of your sources, and I think one of them doesn't exist. That is the one by Kennedy 2020. Can you double check that?

Overall, great job! Sak201 (talk) 18:51, 8 October 2020 (UTC)